Carrolison Humdeydrop

Carrolison Humdeydrop

By Thunder and Cole Carr

Last Thanksgiving, I was with my family it is ALWAYS fun. My sister Samboie threw up the turkey after she tried some. My mom was mad at her because she made the turkey, she thought the turkey was bad or some thing. My dad was watching football all day with Grandpa Lue. Grandma Sue was in the kitchen making pie. My brother Josh was getting the table ready for dinner with me Carrolison and that's how it all started, it was fun until my Aunt Betty shows up for Thanksgiving. So that's how it all happened she went to the living room to see dad. Aunt Betty wasn't wanting to watch the football game, so she said "Turn on the Parade NOW!" If there's one thing I knew about my Aunt Betty it was to listen to her. Otherwise you could get into serious trouble, and even though my dad was her older brother he still listened to her. Grandpa Lue being Grandpa Lue told her "You better watch that tone little lady". Aunt Betty then responded "Ha ha dad your funny I will be going to the kitchen" she then said to my mom "Let me take that turkey to the table" mom said "Okay but I am warning you Samboie tried some and then threw up" Aunt Betty said "Whatever give me some" she then tried some "It needs more pepper". Mom then said "Okay". So mom let Aunt Betty take over, and Aunt Betty fixed the turkey. We all then gathered at the table prayed and took turns saying what we were thankful for. That's also what Thanksgiving was like from then on. 

Amilaison Gumdfrop

Amilaison Gumdfrop

By Cole Carr and Thunder

One lonely Halloween night, I Amilaison Gumdfrop. Was stuck home alone, so I turned on the radio. It was my favorite Halloween song 'No Monsters in my House' I was scared I heard a noise outside, and saw shadows along the wall. 'Oh its nothing, just some people trying to scare me' I thought. But when I looked outside I couldn't see anything. So I just went to the kitchen and got a snack. I heard a noise and looked outside again. 'You're getting scared for nothing its just the trees' I thought again. I then went back into the living room, and watched a show on bears. Another noise. 'Okay it can't be that bad its just people trying to scare me'  I thought yet again. I went into the reading room and got a book to read. Then another noise. 'Okay that is it its time to stop this once and for all' I thought. I then creepily went to the door, and slowly opened it, 'Creek' there on the front porch was a large grizzly bear. I screamed slammed the door and ran in to my room to hide. There sitting on my bed was a ghost of a man that died 3 years ago. I was scared and ran into my brothers room and went under the bed. Next thing I knew the ghost was in front of me and saying 'BOO'. I was so scared so I ran down stairs and huddled in the corner. Hoping someone would come and help me.. The bear must have come in through the window because it was standing in front of me, all big and tall. That was the final straw, I called my brother begging him to come home so I wouldn't be alone anymore. He said he would be here in fifteen minutes. 'Great just great, I'll be stuck here for another fifteen minutes, with a bear and a ghost.' I thought, 'Wait I can just pray that they'll go away like in the song no monsters, in my house' I thought yet again. So I prayed that God would protect me and keep me safe and he did. The ghost disappeared and the bear ran outside. 

Comments

Hey!! I want to know what y'all think of my books... So PLEASE comment... I would enjoy your input.... Tell me what I did right or wrong.. Or what you think I should change or add in..... Thank you!! :-D

Life Is Full Of Mistakes (Chapter 1)

Life Is Full Of Mistakes (Chapter 1)

By Cole Carr

Characters

Harry Gelatin (Married to Gemera)
He has brown hair and green eyes.
Gemera Raven Gelatin. She has black hair and blue eyes.
Left Gelatin is 17 and, Harry and Gemera’s oldest by 2 minutes. He has black hair and green eyes.
Right Gelatin is 17 and, Harry and Gemera’s 2nd oldest by 1 minute. He has black hair and green eyes.
Wrong Gelatin is 17 and, Harry and Gemera’s youngest. He has black hair and green eyes.

Blake Stander (Married to Margaret)
He has blond hair and grey eyes.
Margaret Gelatin Stander has red hair and purple eyes.
Serious Stander is 17 and, Blake and Margaret’s oldest by 18 minutes. He has red hair and grey eyes.
Cereal Stander is 17 and, Blake and Margaret’s 2nd oldest. He has red hair and grey eyes.
Gutter Stander is 6 and, Blake and Margaret’s 3rd oldest. He has blond hair and and purple eyes.

Charlie Raven (Married to Marlow)
He has black hair and blue eyes.
Marlow Gelatin Raven
She has red hair and pink eyes.
Terra Raven is 15 and, she is Charlie and Marlow’s oldest. She has black hair and pink eyes.
Aveeno Raven is 12 and, Charlie and Marlow’s 2nd oldest by 1 hour. She has red hair and blue eyes.
Oatmeal Raven is 12 and, Charlie and Marlow’s 3rd oldest. He has red hair and blue eyes.
Urgent Raven is 10 and, Charlie and Marlow’s 4th oldest. She has red hair and blue eyes.
Sasaria Raven is a newborn and, Charlie and Marlow’s  youngest. She has black hair and pink eyes.

William Raven (Married to Flow)
He has black hair and brown eyes.
Flow Gelatin Raven
She has red hair and green eyes.
Winsanity Raven is 15 and, William and Flow’s oldest by 3 minute. He has black hair and green eyes.
Wake Raven is 15 and, William and Flow’s 2nd oldest. She has black hair and green eyes.
Girl Raven is 13 and, William and Flow’s 3rd oldest by 2 minutes. He has red hair and brown eyes.
Boy Raven is 13 and, William and Flow’s 4th oldest. She has red hair and brown eyes.
People Raven is 10 and, William and Flow’s youngest. He has red hair and brown eyes. 

Boy said “It’s our birthday time to get up Girl” Girl responded “Go away, it’s too early Boy, NOW GO AWAY!” Boy “Whatever, you don’t get blueberry waffles” Girl "Now if you said that I would’ve gotten up” Boy “We also start a new school today” Girl “Woop-Tee-Doo, we start a  new school every year, what is it this year? Private school or Public school” Boy “A private school with, a uniform... And before you say anything think about this I have to wear a skirt” Girl "Yeah, yeah I'll be down in a minute, SO GET OUT OF MY ROOM BOY!" Boy "Okay I'm going, I'm going". Boy walked downstairs three minutes later Girl walked down. They then headed off to school. At school in their homeroom, Mrs. Kidder "Okay class please fill out page 7 of your workbooks" Boy raised her hand, Mrs. Kidder "Yes Ms. Raven" Boy "Please it's Boy and that's Girl my twin brother" Mrs. Kidder "Okay now what were you going to say Ms. Raven?" Boy "We already did these questions in are old school" Ms. Kidder "Okay then what are the answers?" Boy "1. Is God sent his one and only son to die for us. 2. Is Proverbs 17:17 says A friend loveth at all times, and a brother is born for adversity. 3. Is on Christmas the three wise men went to see Jesus therefore creating Christmas. 4. Jesus died on the cross for are sins. 5. Naomi was Ruth's mother-in-law." Girl "I'll answer the next questions. 6. Is Ruth married Boaz. 7. John 3:16 says 'For God so loved the World that he gave his one and only son that whosoever believeth in him shall not perish but have eternal life'. 8. Jesus walked on water. 9. The oldest men in the Bible was Noah and Moses. 10. Ruth never left Naomi even after both of their husbands died" Mrs. Kidder "Okay I will transfer you both to Professor Raven's class" Boy "Which Professor Raven?" Mrs. Kidder "Professor Charlie Raven" Girl "Okay Mrs. Kidder, thank you". They left the class and walked to their Uncles class. Charlie "Hello you must be Mr. and Ms. Raven" Boy "Please Uncle Charlie it's Boy and Girl" Charlie "Okay but I'm Mr. Uncle Raven or just Mr. Raven please" Then over the loud speaker they heard William "Mr. Charlie Raven, Mr. Girl Raven, and Ms. Boy Raven please report to my office, immediately" The whole class "Ooooo, you're in trouble". They then went to William's office, Charlie "What's wrong William?" William "Nothings wrong I just wanted you to know Sasaria was born 30 minutes ago" Charlie "But she wasn't due for another 2 weeks" William "Always expect the unexpected, especially when you're a Raven". In class with Left, Right and Wrong, Ms. Juna-limper "Okay class when you here you're name please say here Left Gelatin" Right "Here" Ms. Juna-limper "Right Gelatin" Wrong "Here" Ms. Juna-Limper "Wrong Gelatin" Left "Here" Ms. Juna-limper "Very funny boys, because you're Left, you're Right, and you're Wrong" Left "Correct you are" Then over the loud speaker they heard William say "All Raven's, Gelatin's and Stander's please report to my office". They all went to William office, Wake "What's wrong dad?" William "Nothing I just thought you'd want to know Sasaria was born earlier" Terra "I'm a big sister again" Charlie "Yes you are Terra, yes you are" William "And we're moving again" Boy "But we just moved here, so where to now? Don't tell me Hollywood?" William "As a matter of fact we are moving to Hollywood" Girl "But she was only joking" Charlie "He knows now Terra, Aveeno, and Oatmeal please come with me" Gemera "Left, Right and Wrong please come with me" Margaret "Serious and Cereal please come with me" Boy "Dad how come we haven't left yet" the new principal pulled up, William "Because I was waiting for the new principal so come on kids time to go". At Charlie and Marlow's house, Urgent ran up to Charlie, Urgent "Daddy, daddy guess what?" Charlie "What Urgent?" Urgent "I'm a big sister" charlie "That's great Urgent" Urgent "You better go find mommy now". Charlie "Marlow where are you?" Marlow "In are room with Sasaria" Charlie "Okay I'm coming up", Charlie ran up the stairs, Marlow "Hello Charlie, meet Sasaria Gummy Raven" Charlie "Looks like we have another Pinky" Marlow "That we do Charlie, that we do" The kids peeked in through the crack in the door, Terra "Can we meet our new sister dad?" Charlie "Yeah come on in kids," Terra "Look she has my eyes and hair" Charlie "Yes she does Terra, what do you think of her Aveeno, Oatmeal" Aveeno "She's gorgeous dad". They all packed and our now on the airplane, Cereal "Isn't this amazing Left?" Right "Yeah it is" Cereal "You're not Left, you're Right" Serious "Be quiet back there!" Cereal "Or what Serious?" Serious "Or I'll tell Uncle William" William "What's going on boys?" Cereal "I was having a conversation with Right and Left and he told me to be quiet" Serious "Yeah, because I was taking a nap until they rudely woke me up" William "If you don't stop now you will be grounded, am I clear boys?" Cereal "Yes sir" William "Thank you". Later on at the new house they were doing the opening scene for the show. Harry "Hello I'm Harry Gelatin, and this is my wife Gemera, and our three boy's Left, Right and Wrong" Blake "Hello I'm Blake Stander, and this is my wife Margaret, and our three boys Serious, Cereal and Gutter" William "Hello I'm William Raven, and this is my wife Flow, and our five kids Winsanity, Wake, Boy, Girl, and People" Charlie "Hello I'm Charlie Raven, and this is my wife Margaret, and our five kids Terra, Aveeno, Oatmeal, Urgent and Sasaria". The next morning, Left "Mom come quick Left's hurt" Gemera "Very funny Left" Left "How did you know it was me?" Gemera "I know my baby boy" Left "Mom I'm not a baby" Gemera "Oh yes you are" Then Right and Wrong came down the stairs, Gemera "Right, Wrong I have a question" Right "Okay ask away Mama" Gemera "Are you my baby boys?" Right "We're not babies but we're you're little boys" Gemera "Thank you, just the answer I was looking for" Left "How was I supposed to know, I'm not a book worm like Right, a football player like Wrong, I'm a wimpy skateboarder" Gemera "You are not wimpy, You are my little skateboarder".

Comment

Please feel free to comment! I would love the input...

The Adventures Of Kitty Louise (Chapter 1)

The Adventures Of Kitty Louise

Chapter 1: Things Start Changing

By Cole Carr

Characters

Kitty Louise Lasane               Mrs. Lasane

Charlie ,Camo, Knect            Mr. Lasane

Thelma                                  Mrs. Knect

Stuart ,Stat,                           Mr. Knect

Thomas ,Time,              Mr. Sane ,Art Teacher,

Syndy                              Nicolea

Zachary ,Zach, Lasane      Elisabeth

Nicolai

Early Friday morning, Mrs. Lasane said "Louise get up you're going to be late to school" Louise "Okay be down in ten minutes" Mrs. Lasane "Okay see you in ten minutes, just telling you you're ride is here." Ten minutes later, Louise came downstairs and said "Morning Dad, Mom, Thelma, Camo, Syndy, Time, and Stat" Thelma "Morning Louise." They soon arrived at school, and like always Nicolai was waiting for them, Nicolai said "Hey, how are you?" Louise responds "Hey I'm good, how are you?" Nicolai "Great, gotta get to class now bye" Louise "Bye." Mr. Sane said "Class today is a special day, can any of you tell me why?" Louise "Meow" Mr. Sane "Repeat that please?" Louise "Because it's my sixteenth birthday" Mr. Sane "Oh I didn't know that, no what I was saying it's so special because this day last year I met eight courageous kids who would stop at nothing to help others. Do any of you know who I'm talking about?" Louise "Me, Camo, Thelma, Stat, Elisabeth, Zach, Syndy, and Time" Mr. Sane "Correct you are Louise, why do you help people?" Louise "Because meow" Louise hisses because something hits her of the head, Mr. Sane "Repeat again please?" Louise "Because we have to love our neighbors as ourselves" Mr. Sane "Correct Louise, now for your assignments, draw one of your favorite people and be prepared to say it in front of class! Now have a great day class." Stat said "Louise why do you keep meowing and hissing?" Louise "I do not meow" Stat "What?" Louise "I don't know okay" Stat "Okay, okay I get it" Thelma "What's going on you two?" Louise "He told me I was acting like a CAT! I don't like cat's!" Thelma "I know you don't, but I don't think that's a reason to get mad, Stat didn't know that" Stat "I actually did know that" Thelma "I didn't know that you knew" Louise "I told all my friends" Thelma "Oh, bell just rang, bye Louise and Stat" Louise "Bye Stat, Thelma" Stat "Bye Louise and Thelma" Louise "Thelma you still coming over after school?" Thelma "Yeah see you then". Later on that day, ding dong, Louise "Coming, hey Thelma" Thelma "Hey Louise, ready to watch x-men?" Louise "Yes, but Syndy isn't here yet" Thelma "She isn't coming, I ran into her after school, she had to go home" Louise "So Syndy's not coming?" Thelma "No she isn't coming, she said something came up, and she had to go home" Louise "Oh, stop talking Zach's home" Zach "Hey whatcha watching sis?" Louise "Nothing, she would be interested in" Louise points to Nicolea, Zach "What's it called Louise?" Louise "X-meow" Zach "X what?" Louise "I said meow-men" Zach "Louise are you feeling alright?" Louise "I'm feeling meow, thank you very meow" Zach "Louise you're not a cat so stop acting like one" Louise "I'm not acting meow a meow" Zach "You should go Nicolea and Thelma come back when I call okay?" Nicolea and Thelma "Okay", Nicolea and Thelma leave, Louise "What's meow with meow?" Zach "Dad, mom you should come down here quick" Louise "Meow wrong meow me?" Zach "I think mom and dad should tell you not me, wait there's a note on the fridge" the note said 'Sorry this is on such short notice, but you're father and I won't be back for a couple of weeks, there's food in the fridge that should last until we get back, Love you both Mom.' Zach "Great they left, so now what?" Louise "I can tell people I'm rehearsing for a play" Zach "Would they believe that?" Louise "Yes of meow" Zach "Okay, just stay in tonight okay?" Louise "Meow" Zach "Just stay in OKAY?" Louise "Meow it meow" Zach "Don't talk to anyone on the phone either, got it?" Louise "Meow Zack I meow to meow to my meow's" Zach "Louise just do it" Louise "MEOW" Zach "No you are not going to talk to anyone, you can text or email them though" Louise "My friends I've never Meowed them" Zach "So, all you do is this, then this, then vwala you have a text to be sent" Louise "Meow I'll meow them" Zach "Okay go text you're friends, but no CALLING THEM, got it?" Louise "Fine I won't call them" Louise goes up to her room and texts Thelma. The next Monday at school, Nickolai "Hey Louise, how are you today?" Louise "Meow, you?" Nickolai "What Louise? And I'm good" Louise "Oops sorry, I'm good" Nickolai "That's good time for class, Bye" Louise "Bye". In class, Mr. Sane "Morning class now let's start naming off names Ms. Louise, why don't you start" Louise "Okay this is a picture of my best friend Camo, or as most of you know him by Charlie." Mr. Sane "Okay Zach" Zach "This is a picture of my Aunt Kitty Ginger, before you say anything about how she looks like a cat, she dresses like one all of the time" Mr. Sane "Okay Charlie" Charlie "This is a picture of my best friend Louise". After school Louise and Zach just got home, Louise "Zach about earlier will I really be a cat all the time" Zach "No not until you're older" Louise "Meow meow Zach" Zach "You know I know what you're saying are whole families like you except for dad's side of course" Louise "Okay Meow, I meow meow this" Zach "I don't meow this either" Louise "Wait you too?" Zach "Yep" Louise "We'll meow through meow meow" Zach "Yeah we will".

Joun And Marianna's First Week At Apple Valley Orphanage

Joun And Marianna's First Week At Apple Valley Orphanage

                                 Second book of the Apple Valley Orphanage Series
By Cole Carr

The next morning, Natalie attempted waking Joun up, "Joun, Joun you have to get up NOW" Joun "Okay, okay I'm up, I'm up." Natalie "Now get Marianna and go down to the head office to be put in the orphanage" Joun "Okay I will. Goodbye Natalie" Natalie "Bye Joun, bye Marianna" Marianna "Adios Hermana" Natalie "Adios little Hermana". Natalie headed to class, Joun and Marianna headed to the head office to try and get put into the orphanage. Natalie told Nicolai and Jorge just what was going on. So that they would know just what was happening. The morning news came. Mrs. Lauren "Natalie will you read this article please?" Natalie "Yes Mrs. Lauren, Missing Espinoza's. Joun and Marianna were last seen with parents Mr. and Mrs. Espinoza, yesterday around 3 o'clock. Joun is 16 with black hair and bluish green eyes, Marianna is 8 months with black hair and brownish eyes. Joun was at school it was his first day there he was in the same class as his younger siblings. Because he knew very little English. So therefore he had to go to they're class. Mrs. Lauren  "Students please welcome Joun Espinoza. Natalie, Nicolai, and Jorge's oldest brother. So give a warm welcome to him" Everyone applauds. Joun "Gracias, Thank you" Natalie "You learned more English Joun" Joun "Yes I did, thank you Natalie" Natalie "Your welcome Joun" Mrs. Lauren "Well than Joun you will sit next to Natalie, so you can learn more English" Joun "Gracias Mrs. Lauren" Mrs. Lauren "De nada, Your welcome" Joun "So that's what that word is!" Nicolai "Joun focus on your school work" Joun "And you are?" Jorge "Your long lost hermano's, Nicolai and Jorge" Joun "But I was told you were dead" Nicolai "Yeah well we weren't dead...." Joun "Yes I know that now Nicolai!" Mrs. Lauren "Okay you two, now everybody open your books to page 10 and write out all the answers to question 1-15... Now start" Natalie raised her hand, Mrs. Lauren "Yes Natalie?" Natalie "We did these yesterday" Mrs. Lauren "Oh yes that's right I got my pages mixed up page 11 I mean" Natalie "Okay".. Later after class at around lunch time, Marianna was happily talking "Hermana, Hermano's!" Jorge "Yes that's right we're you're Hermano's and Hermana" Marianna was giggling happily "Up Jor" Jorge "Okay come here" Mariannna "Love Hermano Jor" Jorge "I love you too Hermana Marianna" Natalie "Okay you too, Jorge we have to get to class" Jorge "Okay Natalie, Marianna you have to go back to Ms. Lasoniomin" Marianna "NO, stay Hermano Jor" Joun "Marianna, you have to go to Ms. Lasoniomin, can you do that for me Marianna?" Marianna "Yes Hermano Joun" Natalie "Okay bye Hermana we love you" Marianna "Bye, love Nat, Joun, Jor, and Nic..." They then walked to class, and now were heading to the dorms... Back in the dorm, Joun was talking to his new friend Maximus, or Max for short. Joun "No seriously Max, I have 4 siblings, 2 brothers and 2 sisters" Max "Okay so where are they?" Joun "Well my brothers Jorge and Nicolai are in the dorm next to ours they recently turned 13 and have been here for about a year, the oldest of my sisters Natalie is in the girls dorms and recently turned 13 also, then my youngest sister Marianna is 8 months and is in the baby dorm 3." Max "Wow, you weren't kidding" Joun "Nope, I wasn't kidding goodnight Max." Max "Night Joun". The next morning when Joun woke up he heard a baby talking. Joun "Marianna what are you doing in hear?" Marianna "Up Hermano, up" Joun "Fine come here Hermana" Max "Who are you talking to this early in the morning?" Joun "Hermana meet Max, Max meet my sister Marianna" Max "She's cute" Marianna "Gracias Mai" Joun "Looks like she likes you Mai" Max "Don't call me that only Marianna can" Joun "Oh fine I see" Marianna "It otay Jou" Joun "Thank you Marianna". They then walked to breakfast. Natalie "There you are Marianna you worried Ms. Lasoniomin" Joun "Yeah I find her by my bed this morning" Jorge "Yeah you scared all of us" Joun "She's just a baby, be nice, Jorge, Natalie" Natalie "What about Nicolai?" Joun "He didn't say anything" Nicolai "Because she's just a baby" Max "Are these all the siblings you were talking about?" Marianna "Yea Mai" Max "Gracias for answering my questions Marianna" Marianna "NO, Hermana" Max "What?" Joun "She wants you to call her Hermana" Max "Okay Hermana, Gracias for answering my question" Marianna "De nada, Hermano Mai" Joun "Marianna, time for you to go to Ms. Lasoniomin" Marianna "NO" Joun "Marianna we will not be doing this again, you are going to Ms. Lasoniomin" Marianna "Bye Jor, Nit, Nat, Mai, Jou" Jorge "Bye Hermana". They walked to class, Ms. Lauren "Good morning class! Page 12, questions 1-20." After class on there way to lunch. Joun "Hermana Natalie" Natalie "Yes Joun?" Joun "Natalie, would you say if I know someone who wants to adopt us all?" Natalie "I'd say that is awesome" Joun "Good because their coming after lunch, so we have to go change into something nice" Natalie "Okay I'm going to change". After lunch They went to meet Mr. and Mrs. Stylize. Mr. Stylize "Hello children, what are your names?" Joun "I'm Joun, that's Natalie, Jorge and Nicolai their triplets, and then Marianna she's only eight months" Mrs. Stylize "Ms. Lauren, they will fit into our family perfectly, we will pick them up after lunch" Ms. Lauren "Okay bye Mr. and Mrs. Stylize" Mr. Stylize "Bye Ms. Lauren, Joun,  Natalie, Nicolai, Jorge, and Marianna" Natalie "Bye Mr. and Mrs. Stylize". They then went to their dorms to pack. The next morning Marianna sneaked into Joun's room again. Max "Are you gonna make a habit of this?" Marianna "NO, weave today" Max "What you're leaving me?" Marianna "It otay Mai" Joun "Morning Marianna, Max" Max "Morning Joun" Marianna "Up Mai, up" Max "Okay come here" Joun "Marianna come on it's time for breakfast". After breakfast Joun, Nicolai, Natalie, and Jorge went to class.. Today they learned about God's creation and how he created them all... After lunch they went to the Stylize's home to begin there new life, with each other...