Thursday, November 6, 2014

The Adventures of Kitty Louise: Chapter 2: A New Beginning

The Adventures Of Kitty Louise
Chapter 2: A New Beginning
By Cole Carr and Thunder


Later on that night Zach and Louise were watching a movie and the doorbell rang. Ding dong, Louise "Coming" when Louise opened the door, she was shocked, I mean really shocked there was not only a giant cat that was.... wait standing on two legs, "Hello I'm your Aunt Ginger, and this is your cousin Liolis, your mom sent us here saying you were sixteen and were expected to start changing soon. Hello again Zach I know you're in there" Louise "How? What? Why?" Aunt Ginger "How, I asked your mom how you were and she said you were home without an older cat with you so I offered to come. What I am a cat like you. Why is in the how" Zach "Glad to meow you again Aunt Ginger, Cousin Liolis." Aunt Ginger "Glad to see you meow too" Louise "I guess we're all just a bunch of meow's" Aunt Ginger "Yes we meow Louise... But now to the problem, when you meet other family members, introduce yourselves as Kitty Zach and Kitty Louise" Zach "No way" Aunt Ginger "I was Kitty Ginger until I turned into a full blown cat. Now I'm Ginger Cat, like your mom is Kitty Lasane still" Zach "Why does she have her last name?" Aunt Ginger "That's the way it works, first your Kitty Zach, when you get married your Kitty Lasane, then you're Zach Cat. See how it works Zach?" Louise "Don't mind meow, he's just mad, he's still a kitty" Aunt Ginger "Yes,well that's how it's been for 105 generations, You will understand this stuff better as you get older children, just like cousin Liolas here" The doorbell rang again, Zach "COMING" When Zach opened the door most of his mom's family was standing there, Zach "Hello I'm Kitty Zach" Uncle Nichols Cat "Hello I am your Uncle Nichols Cat, that is my wife Aunt Tonnes Cat, and are children Cousin Kitty Tiara, Cousin Kitty Maximilian, and the youngest Kitty Ti-Ti-Love." Louise "Hello I meow Kitty Louise" Aunt Tonnes "I see you recently underwent your first step to changing into a cat" Louise "Meow I meow" Uncle Nichols Cat "Yes, the talking. Don't worry it only lasts about 15 years. Then you get a tail and ears. They're easy to cover up, and that's about another 15 years. Then you're a cat." Zach "Meow that's confusing" Aunt Tonnes Cat "It makes more sense as it happens.." Louise “But what about boyfriends?” Aunt Tonnes Cat “If they really love you, they’ll learn to deal meow it” Louise “But Camo meows I hate cats” Zach “If you can get through this, so can Charlie”.


The next day at school, Camo “Hey Louise, how was your night? You never called me back” Louise “I know I’m sorry, I never called back. My family came over last night... Hey so you want to come over after school, there’s something I need to tell you?” Camo “Sure Louise, time for art class. What was today’s assignment?” Louise “It was to draw you in 45 years” Camo “Okay good, I did the right assignment”. In art class, Mr. Sane “Now who would like to go first *Louise raises her hand* Okay Louise you start” Louise goes up and shows her picture. Mr. Sane “Why are you a cat?” Louise “Because I thought, that because most of my family dresses like cat’s that I would too” Mr. Sane “That’s nice, and who is the other person in the picture?” Louise mumbling “Charlie” Camo “Can I go next sir?” Mr. Sane “Yes you can Camo” Camo “This is me and Louise in 45 years”. Mr. Sane “How do you know you’ll still be friends in 45 years?” Camo “Because, I just know we will be.”



Camo, Louise and Zach all headed back to the Lasane house. When they opened the door Camo’s mouth dropped, her house was filled with cats walking on two legs. Camo “Louise why our their walking cats, in your house?” Louise “Oh those, are meow family” Camo “You’re Family?” Louise “Yeah, meow are” Camo “But, but you hate cats” Louise “Yes, I hated cats. Until I met them.. And it’ll be kind of hard to hate cats when I am one” Camo “I gotta go” Louise “But Camo, wait.” Camo “What Louise?” Louise “Are we.. gonna be okay?” Camo “Yeah, I just gotta get my head around this.. Bye Louise..” Louise “Bye Camo”. Camo walked out the door, leaving behind a crying Louise. Her Aunt Tonnes Cat, rushed over. Aunt Tonnes Cat “It’s going to be alright Kitty Louise” Louise “No, it’s not he probably hates me now” Aunt Tonnes Cat “If he loves you, he’ll come back” Louise “That’s just it.. I don’t know if he loves me.” Aunt Tonnes Cat “You mean you never said the words” Louise “No, I mean he said it once. But that time doesn’t count” Aunt Tonnes Cat “Why doesn’t it count?” Louise “Because he was talking to his mom. She asked how he felt about me and why he was still with me.. And he said ‘because I love her” Aunt Tonnes Cat “Okay then Louise, I have to go it sounds like Cousin Kitty Tiara got into trouble.” Louise “Okay Aunt Tonnes Cat”. Louise walked up to her bedroom to go to bed.


The next day at school. Camo “Louise can we talk?” Louise “Yeah sure Camo”. They walk outside. Louise “What did you want to talk about Camo?” Camo “Us” Louise “Okay, what about us?” Camo “I love you Louise! But tell me the truth are you hiding anything else from me?” Louise “No, I’m not hiding anything else from you. Are you hiding things things from me?” Camo “I didn’t want to tell you yet.. But I’m a Mutant” Louise “What are your powers? What type of Mutant are you?” Camo “Invisibility, walking through walls, and flying. And a Tramalinn” Louise “Okay, we both hid something from the other” Camo “Yeah, I guess we did.. I’m sorry Louise” Louise “I’m sorry too, Camo” Camo “One more thing, why didn’t you tell me sooner?” Louise “I only found out last week” Camo “Oh” Louise “Why didn’t you tell me sooner?” Camo “My mom told me only tell you when, the time was right.. First we were dealing with school, then with brothers locking you in the house, and then you told me your secret.” Louise “Okay, thank you! And I love you meow Camo” *Camo Starts laughing* Louise “It’s not meow Camo” Camo “Oh, it is plenty funny”.

Later on that night the phone started ringing. Louise “Hello, who is this?” Mrs. Lasane “Louise baby, it’s mommy” Louise “Mommy, I miss you” Mrs. Lasane “I know sweetie, I miss you too” Louise “When are you coming home?” Mrs. Lasane “Not for awhile” Louise “But mommy, why can’t you come home now?!” Mrs. Lasane “Because Louise.. There are stuff that I have to deal with here..” Louise “Like What? Aren't your children important?” Mrs. Lasane “Louise yes you are, which is why my brothers and sister are there. As for what I can’t tell you.. I have to go now sweetheart.. I love you” Louise “Love you too mommy bye” *Louise hangs up and Zach walks in* Zach “Who was that Louise?” Louise “It was mom”. Zach "What did she want? Are meow and meow coming home?" Louise "No, she said not for awhile."

Monday, November 3, 2014

The Adventures of Kitty Louise: Chapter 3: I'm Turning Into What?!?!

The Adventures of Kitty Louise: Chapter 3: I’m Turning Into What?!?!
By Cole Carr & Thunder


I still haven’t come to terms with what’s been going on. I mean I’m a cat.. Thats definately not normal. Camo isn’t helping, what with him dealing with his powers and all that. My parents still haven’t returned, I’m doubting they ever will. They stopped calling about 3 months ago. We’re moving to our Aunt Kitty’s house today. Well better get to school.


At school, Camo “Louise, wait up!” Me “Whats up Camo?” Camo “Why have you been crying?” Me “What makes you say that?” *Camo wipes his thumb across my face* Camo “The dried up tear stains” Me “I’m moving, and switching schools” Camo “Wait!? What?!” Me “Yeah its been 5 months, and my parents haven’t returned yet, so I’m moving in with my Aunt Kitty” Camo “I’ll still see you right?” Me “I don’t know Camo.. I don’t know anything anymore..” Camo “Hey, we’ll work through this together Louise.. We always do” Louise “I know, but Camo, what if my parents never come back? Then what will happen to me?” Camo “Isn’t Zach turning 18 soon?” Louise “Yeah, what about it?” Camo “He could take custody of you?” Louise “Oh yeah, I didn’t even think of that” *School bell rings* Louise “I gotta get to class” Camo “Okay, I love you” Louise “Love you too, Bye”


Later on that day, Louise was finishing up packing. Louise “Hey Zach” Zach “Whats up?”Louise “When you turn 18, will I move back here with you?” Zach “I don’t know yet Louise” Louise “Okay, but will you consider it?” Zach “I will think about it okay?” Louise “That’s all I ask Zach, that you consider it.” Zach “Okay, I love ya sis” Louise “Meow you too bro”.


It was three weeks later, Louise was moving into an apartment with Zach. She missed her old life. So this was definitely welcomed. Louise was carrying in a box. Louise “Hey Zach, where do you want this one?” Zach “Well what does it say on the top?” Louise “Dad and mom’s albums” Zach “It goes in the living room, if you want to unpack it, it goes on the bookshelf.” Louise “Okay, thanks Meow”.


As soon as they were done unpacking, they sat down to eat some chinese food. However as soon as they sat down the doorbell rings. Zach “COMING! *He slowly opens the door* Mom, dad?!” *Louise runs up* Louise “Mommy, daddy?!” Mrs. Lasane “Hey Louise” Zach “Not that it isn't great to see you, but what are you doing here?” Mr. Lasane “We came back kids, we finally got what we needed done, done” Louise “You left us, for 6 months you left us. Not to mention you didn't warn me that I’d start turning into a cat!” Mrs. Lasane “I thought we still had another month” Louise “Which is why when you called I meowed” Mr. Lasane “Louise don’t take that tone with us” Zach “We were just about to eat, is there a reason you’re here?” Mrs. Lasane “We just wanted to make sure you’re alright” Zach “Yeah, we’re alright”.

After their parents left, Zach and Louise sat down to eat their dinner. Louise “Zach did you tell anyone I’m coming back?” Zach “Nope” *Louise’s phone rings, she picks it up* Louise “Hello?” Camo “Hey Louise, when are you coming back?” Louise “You’d be surprised!” Camo “SO, is that a soon?” Louise “You tell me Camo” Camo “Yes” Louise “Alanderville apartments, 31b” Camo “Be there soon” Louise “Okay, bye Camo” Camo “Bye Louise, I love you” Louise “Love you too” *Louise and Camo hang up* Zach “What did Camo want?” Louise “He’s coming over soon” Zach “Okay, then get unpacking” Louise “Okay Meow”.


Twenty minutes later the doorbell rang. Louise “COMING, *Louise opens the door* Hey Camo” Camo “Hi Louise, I’m glad you’re back” Louise “I am too,” Camo “So you coming back to school?” Louise “Yes, I am” Camo “I have to go home.. I love you Louise” Louise “I love you too Camo” Zach “Okay, enough luvey duvey, you have school in the morning” Louise “Okay Zach, Bye Camo” Camo “Bye Louise”. With that Camo left.


The next morning Louise woke up, looked in the mirror and screamed. Zach got up and ran to the bathroom, Zach “Louise whats wrong?” Louise “I thought I wouldn’t have cat ears and a tail for fifteen years?” Zach “What do you mean?” Louise “Look at me, I have ears and a tail” Zach “It’s okay Louise” Louise “No it’s not, Camo was still meowing use to my meowing” Zach “You’ll get through it, you always do” Louise “Thanks Zach, but how am I suppose to hide it?” Zach “Wear a long skirt? I don’t know” Louise “Oh yeah, that should work”.

Later at school, Nicolai “Umm Louise, whats under your skirt?” Louise “A fake meow” Nicolai “I see, but why?” Louise “It looked cool” Nicolai “Ummm okay”. Louise "Nicolai it's not that weird" Thelma "No offence Louise but it kinda is, I mean a year ago you hated cats and suddenly your acting like one" Louise "I thought you were okay with all this, but clearly your not!!" Louise runs away.

Louise was so upset that she didn't notice she had run into Mr. Sane's classroom. Mr. Sane "Are you okay Louise?" Louise "Oh meow, just meow" Mr. Sane " Would you like to talk about it?" Louise "My Meow's think I'm an meow because I meow like a meow" Mr. Sane "I see, have you tried explaining your obsession to them?" Louise "Meow, they wouldn't meow it. I don't even know what I'm doing" Mr. Sane "Try explaining it will do a World of good" Louise "Meow I'll try, Thank you Mr. Sane" Mr. Sane "I'm here whenever you need to talk Louise. Now hurry off to class". Louise had then ran to class.

Watching You

     Watching You
                     By Cole Carr & Thunder

Have you ever had the feeling?
That you were being watched?
Or maybe the feeling?
That someone was following you?
Does it give you the creepy crawlies?
Or a shiver down your spine?
That a single touch can make you burst?
Like a poke?
Or a hug?
Or someone just sneaking behind you?
Well than, if you have those feelings..
You are in definite, being watched

Tuesday, July 8, 2014

5 Miles Till.....

5 Miles Till.....
By Thunder and Cole Carr

The sun was shining
The grass was swaying
All you could hear was the people stomping
When we got water, it was sweeter than honey
Even though, we felt like we were baking, from the inside out
At the end of the 5 mile walk..
We finally reached the river
As we jumped into the river
All 300 of us.

Friday, July 4, 2014

4th of July

  4th of July
By Cole Carr & Thunder


    From bright lights
To screeching sounds
Colors are flashing
        In the sky   
   Each light started
        As a boom
     And turned into
    A beautiful show


 Red, white and blue
The colors of our country
       We are all free
     We are American!!                 


Tuesday, September 3, 2013

Life Is a Mystery: Chapter 1: A Normal Day

Life is a Mystery: Chapter 1: A Normal Day
By Cole Carr and Thunder


Characters
Edmund            Tony
Esara                Tiara
Edgar                Tomas
Elissa                Tahrra
Ekory                Toby
Emily                 Tiala


It was 6 o’clock in the morning all the kids were getting ready for school, Jake and John were getting ready for work. Jena and Jane were getting the lunches ready. When all the sudden it started, obviously Tony and Edmund hadn’t flown in a while, because there wings came out. Tony “MOM, I can’t go to school today” Jena “And why would that be Tony?” Edmund “Are wings” Jane “ I told you, you need to take them out and fly at least once a week, how long has it been since you’ve flown?” Edmund mumbling “3 months” Jena “What did you say?” Tony yelling “3 MONTHS, okay” Jena “Do not yell at me young man, now go fly, I’ll call your Principal” Tony “Sorry Aunt, Mom, we’ll go fly now”.


Tiala “Daddy I can’t stop running” John “Okay, Jena, Jane you better call about all the kids”. Elissa “But I’m fine Uncle and so is Tahrra” John “Okay, whose powers are going haywire?” Tony “Me, Edmund, Emily, Tiala, Tomas and Esara” John “Did you get all those names Jane, Jena?” Jane “Yes, I did. Thank you. Now go do your powers” Jake “We gotta get going John, Bye kids, Jena, Love you Jane” John “Bye kids Jane, Love you Jena” Jane “Love you too Jake” Jena “Love you too John”.  Edgar, Tiara, Elissa, Tahrra, Ekory and Toby left to school 10 minutes after their dads left to work.


Around lunch, seemed to be the worst part of the day. Edmund was tired from flying so much, and Tony was just plain out mad at everyone. Edmund “Mom, can I take a nap yet?” Jane “Fine, go” Tony “I didn’t want a Peanut Butter and Jelly, with Grape Jelly” Jena “Okay, I have had enough,  go to your room. Now Tony”. The kids all took a nap, while Jane and Jena cleaned.


At exactly 5 o’clock all of the children were home. Jake and John wouldn’t be home until 6 o'clock. Jena was making dinner, all the kids powers were back to normal, and they all woke up refreshed. Tony “I’m sorry for yelling at you earlier mom” Jena “It’s alright I know you were just lashing out because of your powers, and don’t do it again please.” Tony “Yeah mom, I won’t I love you” Jena “Love you too, now go do your chores please” Tony “Okay mom”. Elissa “Edgar is sick again mom” Jane “Okay sweetie, thanks. EDGAR come down here please” Edgar “Yes *Edgar gets paler* mom” Jane “Go lay down, I’ll make you some soup” Edgar “Okay mom”.
 

Tuesday, July 2, 2013

Twins (Separated at Birth)

Twins (Separated at Birth)

By Cole Carr & Thunder

 
I remember when I was four years old crawling around chasing my older brother Samson around the kitchen because he took my cookie. Samson “Elias, come on come get the cookie you can do it, just walk to the cookie” I couldn’t walk until that day, the day I took my first steps, I took one step then the next thing I know, Samson “Good job Elias, here’s your cookie” Elias said in a baby voice “Thank you Samson”I could barely talk too. All the neighborhood kids laughed at me, because I still had to be carried around everywhere and wore diapers still. If I ever make it out of this little town I’ll be glad, there's no such thing as secrets, and so if one person knew I still wore diapers everyone knew.


Now over to John’s life. It’s so boring around here, I think I’ll teach myself to play the piano and surprise mother. She’ll be glad yes I will do that. But as soon as I sat down Elisabeth started pestering me about touching mothers stuff, Elisabeth “You really should ask before you touch mothers piano” John “I know what I’m doing Elisabeth” Elisabeth “Yeah right”. I really want a brother I have six sisters and I’m the only boy.


At the age of twelve I could finally talk normal and pronounce my thank you right. Without mumbling. The neighbor kids still make fun of me though. Although I’m still the best horse back rider. My mother and father are calling me their little miracle. Seriously I thought I was going to die quite a few times.


With John, I got my wish I have a baby brother. But they say they can only have one boy. At least I have 3 years before they put me up for adoption again. I mean really, they can have more than one boy. My last parents had 6 boys, and they didn’t put me up for adoption until I was 2 and set their house on fire.


At the age of 15 I was a pain. No one wanted me; they put me up for adoption. And then they tell me I will probably never ride a horse again and I’m moving to England. Really I could never be angrier. I have to leave Ckiller my horse and best friend since I was 4, and started walking. They said something about being too old to take care of insolent teenagers.


With John, well I guess I’m moving to England. I have had 3 years, to say goodbye, but that still doesn’t mean I still won’t like it one bit. My little brothers first word was John, not mother or father but John and now I’m leaving him. My little brother is the cutest thing ever he looks like father with mothers eyes.


 Elias was and is the complete opposite of John. With his curly blond hair and black eyes, while John had straight chocolate brown hair and golden eyes. Elias liked shooting and John liked playing piano. But what they didn’t know is they were twins separated at birth, and so without any knowledge of this they started their journey. So here in Uptown airport, their planes just landed and they gave their bags to their new butler. So they can go home to their new parents.


Shaq V and Louise Chrisla, and their three daughters and 1 son, Elisabeth, Shaq VI, Nester, and Chrysanthemum. John “Bonjour” Shaq VI “Hello, you must be Elias, I’m Shaq VI” John “I take offence to that” Elias “What’s wrong with me?” Shaq V “Boy’s be nice” Elias “John started it” Shaq V “ I don’t care who started it, you two are brothers start acting like it” John “But sir we’re not even related” Shaq V “Did the adoption agency not tell you, two?” Elias “Tell us what?” Shaq V “That you’re twins” John “We’re completely different, we are not twins” Shaq V “Yes, you are John” Elias “If we’re twins, and then you’re from Mars!” Louise “You really are twins; I have your birth certificates.” Elias “But we’re not even from the same town” Shaq V “You were separated at birth” John “But why would our parents send us to two different states?” Shaq V “Your parents didn’t know, they just gave you to the first person who wanted you” Elias “But where are our parents now?” Shaq V “They died 8 years ago” John “Oh, we didn’t know” Shaq V “ I know, you didn’t know” John “But we look nothing alike, Sir” Shaq V “Yes I know, You look like your mother and Elias looks like your father”.


Elias “Did you know our parents?” Louise “Yes we did” John “What were they like mam?” Louise “Oh, they were complete opposites your father loved Borsch, while your mother loved ribs” Elias “You mean to say we look like one parent and act like the other?” Louise “I am saying exactly that” John “How did they meet?” Louise “They met in the 12th grade and started dating the very next day, two years later they got married and had you two, you were sweet little babies. With your itty bitty hands and feet” John “So you’ve met us before?” Louise “Yes, I mean we are your godparents” John “Oh, cool, wait so why didn’t you get us when they died?” Louise “We found out you were living your own lives with friends, so we decided to leave you be. And grow up before taking you” Elias “But then why now?” Louise “Because they put you up for adoption again” John “Oh well that makes sense”.


Shaq VI “Did any of you have siblings?” Elias he also couldn’t pronounce v’s “I had 2 older brothers Jake who moved out when I was 3, and Samson who moved out 2 years ago, he taught me how to walk” John “I had 6 sisters and a baby brother. Amity whom was the eldest, Emily whom the 2nd oldest, Ashley and Eden twins, Elli and Elisabeth the youngest girls. And my youngest brother Elijah Jr. whom’s first word was John” Shaq VI “Okay when did you learn to walk? I learned when I was 8 months” John “I was 1” Elias mumbling “I was 4” John “What was that Elias?” Elias “4” Nester “I was 6 months” Shaq VI “What was your first word? Mine was Mother” John “Mother also” Nester “Father” Elias “Samsoon” Shaq VI “Where did you learn that word?” Elias “It’s what I called my older brother Samson” Shaq VI “Oh okay that makes sense. What is your favorite food?” Elias “Carrots because Ckiller would come up and take them from my hand” John “Please tell me killer is a pet” Elias “Yes and its pronounced CK-Iller, Ckiller” John “Okay, yeah, we are so not related” Shaq V “Yes, you boys are” John “Okay I get” Shaq VI “Okay moving on, what’s your favorite color? Mine’s blue” Nester “Pink” John “Mine’s royal purple” Elias “Yeah because you’re so royal, mine’s chocolate brown, kind of like your hair John” John “Just don’t eat my hair, and I have a question, your favorite childhood memory? Mine is when my younger brother said his first word” Shaq VI “Mine’s when I got my first A” Nester “When Chrysanthemum was born” Elias mumbling “When I could finally pronounce words right” John “You can trust us little bro” Louise “I would correct that statement to big brother” John “I’m younger than him?!” Louise “Yes you are John” Elias “FINE, My favorite memory is moving here away from that town!?!” John “Why is that?” Elias “I was always made fun of because I was different! I couldn’t walk until I was 4, My first word was when I was 3, and I wore diapers until I was 11, no matter what I did I was always made fun of. No shock though that I was the best horse back rider, since my older brother Samson” John “We had no idea Elias, we’re sorry, and I’m sorry I made fun of you, I had no idea of the hardships you have faced in your life” Elias “Nobody did except Samson, but we’ve been kind of distant the last few years” John “You can trust me when I say this. You will never face anything else alone. I know we have only just met but I love you big bro” Elias “And I love you little bro” John “I could teach you how to pronounce your v’s” Elias “I’d like that John”. Life changed for them that day, they accepted they were brothers despite how different they were...