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The Adventures Of Kitty Louise (Chapter 1)

The Adventures Of Kitty Louise

Chapter 1: Things Start Changing
By Cole Carr
Characters
Kitty Louise Lasane               Mrs. Lasane
Charlie ,Camo, Knect            Mr. Lasane
Thelma                                  Mrs. Knect
Stuart ,Stat,                           Mr. Knect
Thomas ,Time,              Mr. Sane ,Art Teacher,
Syndy                              Nicolea
Zachary ,Zach, Lasane      Elisabeth
Nicolai

Early Friday morning, Mrs. Lasane said "Louise get up you're going to be late to school" Louise "Okay be down in ten minutes" Mrs. Lasane "Okay see you in ten minutes, just telling you you're ride is here." Ten minutes later, Louise came downstairs and said "Morning Dad, Mom, Thelma, Camo, Syndy, Time, and Stat" Thelma "Morning Louise." They soon arrived at school, and like always Nicolai was waiting for them, Nicolai said "Hey, how are you?" Louise responds "Hey I'm good, how are you?" Nicolai "Great, gotta get to class now bye" Louise "Bye." Mr. Sane said "Class today is a special day, can any of you tell me why?" Louise "Meow" Mr. Sane "Repeat that please?" Louise "Because it's my sixteenth birthday" Mr. Sane "Oh I didn't know that, no what I was saying it's so special because this day last year I met eight courageous kids who would stop at nothing to help others. Do any of you know who I'm talking about?" Louise "Me, Camo, Thelma, Stat, Elisabeth, Zach, Syndy, and Time" Mr. Sane "Correct you are Louise, why do you help people?" Louise "Because meow" Louise hisses because something hits her of the head, Mr. Sane "Repeat again please?" Louise "Because we have to love our neighbors as ourselves" Mr. Sane "Correct Louise, now for your assignments, draw one of your favorite people and be prepared to say it in front of class! Now have a great day class." Stat said "Louise why do you keep meowing and hissing?" Louise "I do not meow" Stat "What?" Louise "I don't know okay" Stat "Okay, okay I get it" Thelma "What's going on you two?" Louise "He told me I was acting like a CAT! I don't like cat's!" Thelma "I know you don't, but I don't think that's a reason to get mad, Stat didn't know that" Stat "I actually did know that" Thelma "I didn't know that you knew" Louise "I told all my friends" Thelma "Oh, bell just rang, bye Louise and Stat" Louise "Bye Stat, Thelma" Stat "Bye Louise and Thelma" Louise "Thelma you still coming over after school?" Thelma "Yeah see you then". Later on that day, ding dong, Louise "Coming, hey Thelma" Thelma "Hey Louise, ready to watch x-men?" Louise "Yes, but Syndy isn't here yet" Thelma "She isn't coming, I ran into her after school, she had to go home" Louise "So Syndy's not coming?" Thelma "No she isn't coming, she said something came up, and she had to go home" Louise "Oh, stop talking Zach's home" Zach "Hey whatcha watching sis?" Louise "Nothing, she would be interested in" Louise points to Nicolea, Zach "What's it called Louise?" Louise "X-meow" Zach "X what?" Louise "I said meow-men" Zach "Louise are you feeling alright?" Louise "I'm feeling meow, thank you very meow" Zach "Louise you're not a cat so stop acting like one" Louise "I'm not acting meow a meow" Zach "You should go Nicolea and Thelma come back when I call okay?" Nicolea and Thelma "Okay", Nicolea and Thelma leave, Louise "What's meow with meow?" Zach "Dad, mom you should come down here quick" Louise "Meow wrong meow me?" Zach "I think mom and dad should tell you not me, wait there's a note on the fridge" the note said 'Sorry this is on such short notice, but you're father and I won't be back for a couple of weeks, there's food in the fridge that should last until we get back, Love you both Mom.' Zach "Great they left, so now what?" Louise "I can tell people I'm rehearsing for a play" Zach "Would they believe that?" Louise "Yes of meow" Zach "Okay, just stay in tonight okay?" Louise "Meow" Zach "Just stay in OKAY?" Louise "Meow it meow" Zach "Don't talk to anyone on the phone either, got it?" Louise "Meow Zack I meow to meow to my meow's" Zach "Louise just do it" Louise "MEOW" Zach "No you are not going to talk to anyone, you can text or email them though" Louise "My friends I've never Meowed them" Zach "So, all you do is this, then this, then vwala you have a text to be sent" Louise "Meow I'll meow them" Zach "Okay go text you're friends, but no CALLING THEM, got it?" Louise "Fine I won't call them" Louise goes up to her room and texts Thelma. The next Monday at school, Nickolai "Hey Louise, how are you today?" Louise "Meow, you?" Nickolai "What Louise? And I'm good" Louise "Oops sorry, I'm good" Nickolai "That's good time for class, Bye" Louise "Bye". In class, Mr. Sane "Morning class now let's start naming off names Ms. Louise, why don't you start" Louise "Okay this is a picture of my best friend Camo, or as most of you know him by Charlie." Mr. Sane "Okay Zach" Zach "This is a picture of my Aunt Kitty Ginger, before you say anything about how she looks like a cat, she dresses like one all of the time" Mr. Sane "Okay Charlie" Charlie "This is a picture of my best friend Louise". After school Louise and Zach just got home, Louise "Zach about earlier will I really be a cat all the time" Zach "No not until you're older" Louise "Meow meow Zach" Zach "You know I know what you're saying are whole families like you except for dad's side of course" Louise "Okay Meow, I meow meow this" Zach "I don't meow this either" Louise "Wait you too?" Zach "Yep" Louise "We'll meow through meow meow" Zach "Yeah we will".

Sunday, September 2, 2012

Joun And Marianna's First Week At Apple Valley Orphanage

Joun And Marianna's First Week At Apple Valley Orphanage

                                 Second book of the Apple Valley Orphanage Series
By Cole Carr

The next morning, Natalie attempted waking Joun up, "Joun, Joun you have to get up NOW" Joun "Okay, okay I'm up, I'm up." Natalie "Now get Marianna and go down to the head office to be put in the orphanage" Joun "Okay I will. Goodbye Natalie" Natalie "Bye Joun, bye Marianna" Marianna "Adios Hermana" Natalie "Adios little Hermana". Natalie headed to class, Joun and Marianna headed to the head office to try and get put into the orphanage. Natalie told Nicolai and Jorge just what was going on. So that they would know just what was happening. The morning news came. Mrs. Lauren "Natalie will you read this article please?" Natalie "Yes Mrs. Lauren, Missing Espinoza's. Joun and Marianna were last seen with parents Mr. and Mrs. Espinoza, yesterday around 3 o'clock. Joun is 16 with black hair and bluish green eyes, Marianna is 8 months with black hair and brownish eyes. Joun was at school it was his first day there he was in the same class as his younger siblings. Because he knew very little English. So therefore he had to go to they're class. Mrs. Lauren  "Students please welcome Joun Espinoza. Natalie, Nicolai, and Jorge's oldest brother. So give a warm welcome to him" Everyone applauds. Joun "Gracias, Thank you" Natalie "You learned more English Joun" Joun "Yes I did, thank you Natalie" Natalie "Your welcome Joun" Mrs. Lauren "Well than Joun you will sit next to Natalie, so you can learn more English" Joun "Gracias Mrs. Lauren" Mrs. Lauren "De nada, Your welcome" Joun "So that's what that word is!" Nicolai "Joun focus on your school work" Joun "And you are?" Jorge "Your long lost hermano's, Nicolai and Jorge" Joun "But I was told you were dead" Nicolai "Yeah well we weren't dead...." Joun "Yes I know that now Nicolai!" Mrs. Lauren "Okay you two, now everybody open your books to page 10 and write out all the answers to question 1-15... Now start" Natalie raised her hand, Mrs. Lauren "Yes Natalie?" Natalie "We did these yesterday" Mrs. Lauren "Oh yes that's right I got my pages mixed up page 11 I mean" Natalie "Okay".. Later after class at around lunch time, Marianna was happily talking "Hermana, Hermano's!" Jorge "Yes that's right we're you're Hermano's and Hermana" Marianna was giggling happily "Up Jor" Jorge "Okay come here" Mariannna "Love Hermano Jor" Jorge "I love you too Hermana Marianna" Natalie "Okay you too, Jorge we have to get to class" Jorge "Okay Natalie, Marianna you have to go back to Ms. Lasoniomin" Marianna "NO, stay Hermano Jor" Joun "Marianna, you have to go to Ms. Lasoniomin, can you do that for me Marianna?" Marianna "Yes Hermano Joun" Natalie "Okay bye Hermana we love you" Marianna "Bye, love Nat, Joun, Jor, and Nic..." They then walked to class, and now were heading to the dorms... Back in the dorm, Joun was talking to his new friend Maximus, or Max for short. Joun "No seriously Max, I have 4 siblings, 2 brothers and 2 sisters" Max "Okay so where are they?" Joun "Well my brothers Jorge and Nicolai are in the dorm next to ours they recently turned 13 and have been here for about a year, the oldest of my sisters Natalie is in the girls dorms and recently turned 13 also, then my youngest sister Marianna is 8 months and is in the baby dorm 3." Max "Wow, you weren't kidding" Joun "Nope, I wasn't kidding goodnight Max." Max "Night Joun". The next morning when Joun woke up he heard a baby talking. Joun "Marianna what are you doing in hear?" Marianna "Up Hermano, up" Joun "Fine come here Hermana" Max "Who are you talking to this early in the morning?" Joun "Hermana meet Max, Max meet my sister Marianna" Max "She's cute" Marianna "Gracias Mai" Joun "Looks like she likes you Mai" Max "Don't call me that only Marianna can" Joun "Oh fine I see" Marianna "It otay Jou" Joun "Thank you Marianna". They then walked to breakfast. Natalie "There you are Marianna you worried Ms. Lasoniomin" Joun "Yeah I find her by my bed this morning" Jorge "Yeah you scared all of us" Joun "She's just a baby, be nice, Jorge, Natalie" Natalie "What about Nicolai?" Joun "He didn't say anything" Nicolai "Because she's just a baby" Max "Are these all the siblings you were talking about?" Marianna "Yea Mai" Max "Gracias for answering my questions Marianna" Marianna "NO, Hermana" Max "What?" Joun "She wants you to call her Hermana" Max "Okay Hermana, Gracias for answering my question" Marianna "De nada, Hermano Mai" Joun "Marianna, time for you to go to Ms. Lasoniomin" Marianna "NO" Joun "Marianna we will not be doing this again, you are going to Ms. Lasoniomin" Marianna "Bye Jor, Nit, Nat, Mai, Jou" Jorge "Bye Hermana". They walked to class, Ms. Lauren "Good morning class! Page 12, questions 1-20." After class on there way to lunch. Joun "Hermana Natalie" Natalie "Yes Joun?" Joun "Natalie, would you say if I know someone who wants to adopt us all?" Natalie "I'd say that is awesome" Joun "Good because their coming after lunch, so we have to go change into something nice" Natalie "Okay I'm going to change". After lunch They went to meet Mr. and Mrs. Stylize. Mr. Stylize "Hello children, what are your names?" Joun "I'm Joun, that's Natalie, Jorge and Nicolai their triplets, and then Marianna she's only eight months" Mrs. Stylize "Ms. Lauren, they will fit into our family perfectly, we will pick them up after lunch" Ms. Lauren "Okay bye Mr. and Mrs. Stylize" Mr. Stylize "Bye Ms. Lauren, Joun,  Natalie, Nicolai, Jorge, and Marianna" Natalie "Bye Mr. and Mrs. Stylize". They then went to their dorms to pack. The next morning Marianna sneaked into Joun's room again. Max "Are you gonna make a habit of this?" Marianna "NO, weave today" Max "What you're leaving me?" Marianna "It otay Mai" Joun "Morning Marianna, Max" Max "Morning Joun" Marianna "Up Mai, up" Max "Okay come here" Joun "Marianna come on it's time for breakfast". After breakfast Joun, Nicolai, Natalie, and Jorge went to class.. Today they learned about God's creation and how he created them all... After lunch they went to the Stylize's home to begin there new life, with each other...